A Woman's Opportunities -- part 3
[Thanks for the kind remarks, everyone! Having got this far, I'll add a little clarification. Some time back I wrote a pair of AU stories in which Tom finds out about Heath while Leah is alive and...
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Ooh, this doesn't look good! Martha is going to tell Heath something that Leah has never confided in him!!Boy, she is a woman out for herself, now isn't she?And the way you portray is perfect - an...
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Martha accused Leah of being selfish? That's a good one! What kind of trouble is Martha going to brew with Heath and/or Tom? Debbie
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I am finding this a most compelling story to read. I am devouring every chapter. I don't believe I've read your earlier stories and can only think they must have been posted at a time when I was less...
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This is such a different and fascinating story! Not all characters are lovable, but at least you help us understand them. Great job! Pat
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Martha's out for herself and I wonder if she will tell Tom about Heath. Great story and
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What a facinating tale you are telling, Doreliz, and certainly very original!! Don't think anyone has cared enough before to explore the life of 'Martha' with this depth!!! Nope, she's not a nice...
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You are weaving quite a tale here. I especially liked your very realistic descriptions of the decline of Strawberry--very true to real history. Looking forward to more.
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Oh Martha! What are you going to casue to happen with your impassioned selfishness.
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Oh my goodness ... the wheels in Martha's brain are spinning overtime right now. Very anxious to learn the scheme she is hatching.
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I do not like this woman. You write her wee, though. One could almost feel sorry for her and then she opens her mouth! Good job.
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Fantastic doreen! You've taken the cartoon character of Martha and turned her into a real human with conflicting impulses and emotions who misses some opportunities and makes the most of others.
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